Clarification of My Earlier Post

I have no plans to start from scratch. I need to re shoot all my footage in any case, therefore I feel this is a good opportunity to see where I've gone wrong with my first attempt. A song more suited to my editing style, a slower song (The Only Ones Who Know by The Arctic Monkeys), with a better narrative (the dinner date scene which I will explain in a post very soon) will allow me to still use my research to develop my new video. The performance features of the Jake Bugg Video and the Miles Kane video I looked at are still very much relevant to my new performance idea, as the professional range of shots (typical of the genre) can help me improve where I needed to improve previously.