music video from Freddy Allen on Vimeo.
The premise of the video is that a 2 timing boyfriend pays the price, he watches it unfold whilst performing the song. The applause at the start is meant to contrast from the emptiness and coldness of the room which the performer enters, judge for yourself if it works- it's certainly experimental.
This is a lot better, Freddy - certainly a step up from the previous attempt. Some of the takes are still too long and I think you need to make more of the narrative, but the general framework is solid and the tone is appropriate. I would suggest making the performance footage black and white, and keeping the slightly surreal tone of the "narrative" in the grading you've chosen. You might also want to consider cross-dissolves between shots, to link with the slide guitar sound. So, basically, a decent rough cut - well done.
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