Update

Introduction

First of all, hello again. After a summer of relaxing and studying, I'm back and full of enthusiasm towards the prospect of creating a professional music video, but more importantly a fascinating one.

What have I learned

Having reviewed my previous efforts of making a rap video or similar, I have used my new knowledge of music video theories and representations to understand how poorly thought out the video in fact  was. Rule 1 of Andrew Goodwin's- Dancing in the Distraction reveals this (video link explaining the theory).The low morals of man passed on the floor were not fully explained or justified, creating a confusion which not view well.

 In addition the hazy, slow motion camera shots do not get the effects which was looking for, therefore research must be done into which camera shots suit which genre best.

Genre change

Expanding on what I have just mentioned, as I did not capture the essence of a rap video in my first video attempt, and i'm now inclined to believe i would be better suited making an Alternative music video rather than rap, as objectively speaking i have known more about that genre for a longer time.